[Class suggestion]:The Dragon

Here was my original suggestion for the contest. it wasn’t accepted as it includes the swordbearer, that isn’t a neutral killer.

The Dragon (Neutral Killer)
Passive: it’s a fuckin’ dragon: If the dragon is in the game, everyone will be notified of who the dragon is. The swordbearer will also be in the game. The dragon cannot be put on trial, or be targeted by day abilities. He cannot talk in the day chat. He will not be shown at the table. The dragon cannot be killed, exept by the Sword. The dragon cannot be converted.

Night Ability 1: Eat alive (infinite uses)
Attack your target. If you didn’t use “eat alive” last night, this attack bypasses night immunity. you will eat alive anyone that occupies you.
Night Ability 2: Spew fire (1 use)
Attack your target and everyone that visits them. this does not bypass immunity.
Day Ability 1: Roar (infinite uses)
Send a message to everyone. if you didn’t use roar yesterday, no day ability can be used. this cannot be used in the first minute of the day.
Goal: Kill every blue dragon, unseen, cult and neutral killers.

The Swordbearer (Neutral Wildcard)
Passive: If the swordbearer dies, his killer will gain the sword. the killer will then be able to kill the dragon, and his attacks will now bypass night immunity. If the swordbearer was executed, the prince will get the sword and “slay” night ability, or if he was lynched, the king gains the sword and the “slay” (attack your target) night ability. If the swordbearer’s killer dies, a random killer or the king will obtain the sword. If the dragon has the sword, anyone visiting him at night will get the sword and “slay” night ability.
Night Ability 1: Use the Sword (1 use)
Anyone visiting you will die. this bypasses night immunity. you are night immune this turn.
Day Ability 1: Contact The greater.
You can send a short message to the dragon.
Day Ability 2: Hypnotise
The Sword’s gem hypnotises your target, occupying them tonight.
Goal: Survive.
My first ever class made. It might be way too good for a neutral~ i don’t really know that much about balancing.
be sure to dissect it and destroy any remains of confidence i have left.
And yes, i know it’s a confusing mess. i realised it now~ and i’ll try to make it clearer.

So… basically impossible to kill except by the Swordbearer. I don’t like that… it feels way too overpowered, even if it’s known who the Dragon is.

You forgot the uses.

Two attack abilites? And even one that kills all visitors? Seems all-too powerful, imo.


Swordbearer:

But how will he kill the Dragon without any abilities to go and actually kill it? All it can do is watch out for visits, send a message and occupy someone.

But since the Dragon can kill occupiers when using “Eat Alive”, the ability to occupy is also often rendered moot.


Sorry to say, but I’m not a fan of either of these two classes.

8/8

to gr8

i knew some people wouldn’t understand.
Imagine the swordbearer gets killed by a reaper.
the reaper itself gets the sword, and his normal attack can now kill the dragon, and bypasses immunity. (so there’s no more need for gather darkness)

fixed

it was the thing i wanted to make original~ not a way to kill as a neutral killer, but a way to be killed.

seeing how the dragon is revealed to everyone, being able to occupy it for the first 3 nights could be frustrating, but you’re right, it might also balance the class out.

don’t be sorry about an opinion :wink:

Does Use the Sword give you any immunities?

i should’ve added that, sorry~
night immune, but not occupy immune.

You see the problem?

You can’t use day abilities on the dragon, and so, can’t roleblock him into visiting you and try to eat you alive when you Use the sword.