Another Neutral that does not have to swear allegiance to any sides? I always love those!
Ok, let’s do this!! I’m hyped!
THE THIEF
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Great base idea! We need to have a thief in there, independently of if he’ll have this abilities or not. I believe you changed his goal from having prince and king dead of something like that? Aiming for the Royal Blood is way better! But I wanna suggest something bold here to make it truly an offensive class, because I think your suggestion is stuck in the middle of offensive / killer.
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Keep that goal. Keep it! You will understand why later.
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I don’t get the point of False Defiance and as of the moment I think it would greatly hurt the Thief instead of helping in any way. With that said, I’d like you to explain your idea around that passive before actually giving my opinion. I think I lack the information to really help with it.
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Proper Count is a must have.
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I also saw that you mixed some new ability with Distract. I actually think that just Distract would suffice here. Drugged Dagger honestly seems a bit too much. What was the other ability? I’m curious to hear about it!
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I don’t think Time Bomb matches the idea of the class. I would honestly take it out. However if you really like it, I’d suggest a change to Proximity Bomb. You plant a bomb in the players room, if they leave it, it will go off and prevent them from leaving.
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Spying Eyes is also a must have.
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I will adress Swift Shift in the Rogue part. For now, I’ll just say I would prefer it out.
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Robbery is the huge breaking point here. As much as I like it, I don’t. If this ability stayed as it is, it work much better as a passive. As soon as the last Royal Blood dies, you win and that message about the robbery appears in the chat. This is how I’d change it:
Night ability 2 - Robbery: Occupy the target. If he’s a royal blood, he will be robbed of one use of his limited abilities. He will then count as a robbed target toward your goal and be reduced from the Proper Count passive.
Yes! Your goal is to use robbery succesfully once in every Royal Blood or in an X number of Royal Bloods. -
I really like how the thief winning screws over everyone but I don’t think that should happen. The addition of the thief with that power would add even more steam to the Neuts Out policy. No one would EVER want to risk a thief winning. I think it’s good enough that the Royal Bloods will “bleed” from his presence.
THE ROGUE
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I love that the thief is convertable even though he already hurts BD. That’s new. That’s bold! I love bold ideas.
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I have mixed feeling about having that goal or maintaining Thief’s goal but the latter would require a lot of changes to your suggestion so let’s keep it that way!
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I get the feeling that Keen Sense is just…there. I don’t dislike it, but I also don’t like it. I don’t see it really matching the idea of the class. All in all, it’s not a bad passive and not an OP one. I have no problem with it being kept there as it helps the unseen with that little piece of information. I just really think it doesn’t match the class.
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If you followed my suggestion to take Time/Proximity Bomb out of the Thief, this is where you place it. Replacing Stealthy Gait with it. I think that with Keen Sense and Stealthy Gait you are trailing a path of investigation, where you should be going offensive. Proximity Bomb would be my go to.
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Deprive? Yes, please! This is exactly what I’m talking about here!!
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Sadly, on the other hand, it’s a no for Prying Eyes. I really feel like even though it is a very rogue-like ability, it doesn’t match what you are aiming to get. Or at least what I believe you are trying to get and I hope you get it. Remember I told you I’d adress Swift Shift later? So…
Night ability 2 - Swift Shift: If someone attacks the Unseen tonight, choose someone who will take the damage instead. That person will only be attacked once and it will count as if you visited them to Observers and Princesses.
I think this is all. I was so happy to see you ask me for feedback. Feel free to do that always! Also thanks for the trust to allow me to help here. I hope I did. Let me know!