I agree
Where should the story be set?
In and around a white van.
From whose point of view should the story be and from what point of view? (first person, third person)
Third person, a kidnapper names DJ.
Whoās the main character? Describe him as best as you can. Name, personality, a picture of him, and maybe a quote of how he usually speaks.
The main character is DJ, and he lures people into his white van with candy and WiFi. He was put into jail before, but he escaped and is on the loose, trying to get people into his van so he can ship them to Sri Lanka.
What situation do you want to put him in? It can be an accident, an event, or something simple like his morning routine.
Whatever you want bro.
What tone do you want for the story? Comedic? Serious? Angsty? Cringey? Describe it.
Dark, but slightly comedic as the plot is.
(this is based off a guy in me and cheesyās class at school)
In a room in a large facility, where the rooms are pure white, and its space is vast.
Third person.
A blind man. He is known to not show his emotions,usually. He has shoulder length hair and a quite large figure. His clothes are tattered and torn, in contrast to his polished and refined environment.
He is one man. Against one hundred enemies. Some short, some tall. Some fast, some strong. One weapon. And one enemy that stands out from the restā¦ and their voiceā¦ changes the blind manās emotion.
Serious 
Hopefully this wasnāt too wierd monkaS
kinda
what is the weapon
A park. It is late at night, and the lights arenāt too bright. The skies are cloudy and itās cold, cold enough to shiver. There is a small breeze running through the park as wellā¦
It must be from the girlās side of the story. And it must be written in 3rd person. Capturing of the girlās emotions is of utmost importanceā¦ :3
Name: Shanna Lake
Gender: Female (Age 19)
Appearance: She is a teenage lady, a beautiful school councillor with excellent grades. Sheās admired by many and is a model for the school magazineā¦ Her height is 1m64 and her weight is about 46 kg. She sports light brown hair, long and slightly curly. Her cup size is Aā¦
Personality: Sheās extremely good at taking care of others, but she hides that part of herself, believing it to be too plain to show to othersā¦ She takes great emphasis on her exterior appearance to others who donāt know her true personality. Sheās direct and curt, straight to the pointā¦ She is helpful, hardworkingā¦ Sheās also sadistic and violent, not to mention masochisticā¦ She enjoys her moments with her boyfriendā¦
āYou know Lukeā¦? Heās terrible at lyingā¦ I just feel bad for him when heās trying so hardā¦ā
āI donāt understand my boyfriend. Heās terrible at making braidsā¦ but he keeps wanting to do them for meā¦ and I for some reasonā¦ just like it. His buns are betterā¦ really.ā
āI smell Genny on youā¦ What do you mean how do you know? Never underestimate a womanās sense of smellā¦ā
āYou dummy. Dummy!ā [Runs away smiling] (In response to āYouāre Cuteā)
Continued on next postā¦
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Name: Luke Hasher
Gender: Male (Age 19)
Appearance: Heās a teenager, of height 1m 74, Weight 52 kg. Heās skinny, sports jet black hair. He doesnāt look too studious, his hair is a tad bit spiky, making girls swoon about him. However, he hides a tattoo that is inked on his shoulder down his left back, of a dragon.
Personality: Heās gentle, honest and thoughtful. He can be seen as one of the rare people who actually thinks before he says something. He is TERRIBLE at lying; his eyes get all shifty, he sweats profusely. But if itās his thoughtfulness in play, his lying worksā¦ However, he is hardworking to a fault indeed. He is extremely skilled at making desserts, as his family runs a dessert shop. He enjoys his time with his girlfriend. He also complies with whatever weird requests Shanna has to makeā¦ even if he doesnāt enjoy itā¦ And about his grades. Shanna is very disappointed with themā¦ Need I say more?
āItās like Shanna is a god who can see through my every lieā¦ā (āNo. Itās just that you suck at lying, thats all.ā Insert extreme shocked face here)
āIā¦ donāt know what you meanā¦ā (In response to Shannaās question of where her pen went when her friend took it for a prank.)
āHey, it looks like my worksheet was in my bag after all. I got an extra. Here. What? Iām giving you this as its an extra. Thatās all.ā (When he realised Shanna had her worksheet all torn because she was frustrated the previous day. He went to request a new worksheet from the teacherā¦ Sheās prideful after allā¦)
āShe smiles when I hit her, she loves watching gory moviesā¦ I donāt understand herā¦ She loves me braiding her hairā¦ even when I suck at them. Thereās so much more I donāt knowā¦ā
āI donāt ever want to do that againā¦ā (After hitting Shanna at her request. āBe more violentā¦ā She sulked.)
āYouāre cute.ā (When Shanna was part of a cheerleading squad and in her cheerleading costume. āHow do I look?ā)
Itās been 5 days since they last met. Luke has returned from his family trip and is getting ready to go to Shannaās home, but his phone battery diedā¦(He didnt bring a charger you see) Shanna has waited 5 days without reply from Lukeā¦ This park is a park between the two housesā¦ Their first meeting after the tripā¦
Light. Slightly Comedic. I want LOTSA LOTSA SUGAR
āI never thoughtā¦ 5 daysā¦ could feel this long.ā Shannaās thoughts.
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In place of birth where the most known religions were created: Jerusalem. Inside of Basilica of the Holy Sepulcher and there is only 2 people on action site.
Third Person for sure.
Name: James McGremory
Gender: Male (Age 27)
Occupation: Historian and Relic Collector.He gained funds thanks to skilfully conducted shares on the stock exchange.
Appearance: Young looking gentleman. Height 1m 85, Weight 54 kg. He has mustache and short- cutted beard. Despire that he comes from Scotland, He looks like a person from Victorian Age, wearing tall top hat, jacket with bow tie and polished grace.
Personality: He has the qualities of every self-respecting gentlemen: respecting lades, polite, patient, sociable and conscientious. Sometimes he doesnāt tolerate opposition and he is often stubborn in his views.
An normal conversation while something unexpected happened at the time.
Unrealistic and little serious. But i donāt mind if you involve something else.
On the street of Los Angeles
From Des Pacitoās pov 3rd person
Des Pacito,better despacito creator
Des Pacito lost all his money cuz sued and could not pay the rent. He needs to rise up and become famous again
Serious
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What do you mean?
I just said āok shuā.
tf is wrong with that?
How about this. Dama doesnāt need quickly write any stories right now. He will do it eventually which i believe no one would have objections.
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This is 100% false statement. There is nothing such as āneverā unless he stated he wonāt do it anymore.
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jeez
im just saying that its gonna take a while for dama to do this many stories, and more will just mean itāll take longer.
you dont need to take it so seriously
literally any argument i have with anyone:
i say something
they get triggered
i say āchillā
we argue for a bit
then delet messages
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uh ok