(btw feel free to say a shot misses or misfires or whatever, i just say my intended action, feel free to roll with it or change the results. )
(the talk with Cal was the most stressful thing I have done all year long)
The wolf manages to dodge a bit. The arrow hit his upper leg slightly
āOi! Come and get me you bastard!ā Jacob is trying to draw the wolf over to himself and away from Albert/Mary.
Several howls can be heard. The young wolf stops, and starts walking away.
(Where is everyone atm?)
A suspicious figure starts following her
Wakes up in the morning, hears a sound at the door, It appears to be the mail man, but what is this? A special delivery? He opens the package to find a card, a god card, inside. The god card is titled, āAdrestiaā. Brakx wonders what this is.
Either way he heads out into the city.
He can see a woman walking into a nearby alley, with a suspicious figure following her
(Consistancy is hard)
( Iām talking about what your character can see )
(Still doesnāt brake the pount that they swapped genders in your sentence)
She realizes she is beign followed and turns into a dead end alley, time to have some fun.
(Itās Valerie LOL)
I donāt know and I donāt care, if he is looking for trouble he can get it. What are you doing here anyway? never seen you taking this route at this time.
(the āherā wasnt to your character, a more specific way to say it is this: āHe can see a woman walking into a nearby alley, with a suspicious figure following the womanā but that doesnt sound good (which, for some reason, is how i detect grammar))
(wat)
(basically the sentence actually says āBrakx can see a woman walking into a nearby alley, with a suspicious figure following the womanā not āBrakx can see a woman walking into a nearby alley, with a suspicious figure following Brakxā as you may think)