that’s it I refuse to read anything written in stanzas anymore
I won’t do it
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a point i think to keep in mind
is that the poems limit scum:
because so few of us now rhyme
poetic jumps cannot be dumb.
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Why are we doing these rhymes?
There really hasn’t been much to go on as well
you dont have to, but i will
all im saying is, it takes skill
makes it hard to copy me
in case im jumped, and then youll see
Baseball and France seem fine.
Rhymes are not necessarily scummy like others whine.
Alarm and Lock are likely not both wolf.
Because Lock feels like they’re sincerely trying to throw Alarm in a gulf.
The animals two
Have not said much special, have you?
So a read I shall not place.
Until there is more to analyse with grace.
Heart and Stop were here at the start.
But as for their posts? None reach my heart.
Cloud’s ISO is a tale of two sides.
The first part felt scummy, the second perhaps is towny for how it guides.
So I will place a read of “unsure”
Though this slot is the first with a start that wasn’t pure.
Shirt simply felt like a sheep.
But with trying to have a closed mind and then follow Cloud… it just feels cheap.
Coin feels weird and slightly performative.
I wish their ISO was a bit more afformative.
Eggplant’s just done nothing but a basic and not well explained vote.
I would not be complaining if at this rate… this slot was yote.
TL;DR
Cloud/Eggplant/Coin look worst from initial looks into their slots.
I would read more but there’s a lack of posts so I cannot.
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I actually didn’t think about that
I disagree, there’s plenty to go on, hamster.
Speaking of, if anybody’s scum buddies with eggplant (considering it seems they will be the lynch, unless they actually come out with a defense), I’d say Joy_Stop considering they entered thread about twice (while it was dead) and did literally nothing. You can chalk it up to inactivity/busyness, but personally it looks like somebody who’s content with thread staying stagnant.
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then i might ask, do you have plans
to make yourself hard to copy?
be it poems or quirks, you can
try so scum cannot be sloppy.
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with this i have to agree
its fairly easy to see
theres nothing of use, and joy_stop wont let loose,
so a possible wolf shall they be.
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I’ll have to think about that.
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While I can’t deny your rhyming skill
It seems you have much time to kill
To spend 20 minutes on each post
And while they are the ones I enjoy the most
I can’t help but truly feel
They make your thoughts feel less real
And if my criticism doth offend
I didn’t mean to, my joyful friend
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no offence taken, you have a reason-
its not so hard to understand.
but i dont spend the entire season
trying to write these poems by hand!
(if it gets too hard to trust,
the primary goal is to be clear
with my thoughts, so if I must
ill break the trend to so all can hear
what i mean to say, without delay
and so confusion is kept at bay.)
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It seems I can’t deny your speed
With which you wrote that verse
Your writing skills are great indeed
But is that a blessing or a curse?
perhaps its both a good
and a bad thing that its quick.
it doesnt mean i should,
but its simple and its slick.
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If you’re making poems in your post I’m not reading it
Just a fyi
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good luck reading me
if you never read my posts.
i dont think thats the way to be,
or I may as well be a ghost.
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I just won’t read you
Well I’ll read the first two lines
And if it’s a poem I’ll keep going