Class Re-Wording/Typoâs/Grammar Mistakes:
Going to be very picky
- Butler:
Nightshade Wine (Day) - Poison The King, causing him to die tonight if not healed. The king will not be informed if he is poisoned. If the King is Good, you will commit suicide. - 1 use, available starting Day 2
One of the Theâs are wrong, one has a capital the other doesnât. Same goes for the other poison, pick one and donât use both.
- Butler Cult Alt:
(Nightshade Wine): Toxic Wine (Day) - Add a lethal amount of cyanide into The Kingâs wine, causing The King will die from cyanide poisoning tonight unless healed. The king is not informed of the poison. If they are Devout, you will commit suicide due to Mithras anger the following night. - 1 use
Should say Mithrasâ not Mithras.
- Court Wizard:
Arcane Empower (Day) - The target of your night ability, this night, will bypass immunities (discounting conversion immunity) and be guaranteed to succeed with their actions. Their investigative abilities will always receive correct results. 2 Uses.
This sentence should follow what everything else says and instead say: âThe player that you target with your ability tonightâ
- Drunk:
Debauchery (Night) - Force a player to target a second of your choice. (you wonât be immune to attacks or conversion if you force them to target you). You will only be seen visiting the first. - Infinite use
Majority of the things in the brackets donât need to be specified on all classes.
- Noble Cult Alt:
Court Spies: Cult Connections (Day) - At the end of the day, you will learn who voted for whom during todayâs king election. - 2 uses
Court Spies should have brackets around it.
- Observer:
Little Bird (Day) - Send a bird to track if target player leaves their room that night or not. In addition, you will learn if any players visited target player or not. You will be told the next morning. - 2 uses
Why not just say that youâll be told at the end of the night like other abilities?
- Paladin Cult Alts:
(Cleanse Cult Alt) Bloodâs Purity (Day) - Tonight, the Cult Leaderâs action will succeed. Bypasses visit prevention, occupation and the court wizardâs barrier. - 1 use
(Test of Faith Alt) All-Seeing Eye (Night) - Learn a playerâs class. - 2 uses
Smite
Literally just the smite part. Gave me a little laugh at how this was missed since Oct 11, '18. I suppose there was a Smite Cult Alt planned but eventually forgotten about.
- Aristocrat:
They were successfully Investigated.
They were successfully Occupied.
Their target was successfully swapped.
This section should be in quotes on the classcard like the Noble.
- Sage:
Shock (Night) - The target player will be target themselves with their ability tonight. - Infinite uses
My main inspiration for this thing. I donât think âwill be target themselvesâ is correct. I believe the be doesnât even need to exist.
- Sage 2:
Dark Rune (Day) - Choose a player. If that player uses an ability today they will target themselves with it. - 2 uses
Shock (Night) - The target player will be target themselves with their ability tonight. - Infinite uses
âŚisnât this literally the same ability but one is at night and the other is during the day?
- Cult Leader:
Train (Passive) - At any point before the start of the first night, you may message the host and choose the Cult alts that the Cult class that spawned with you will receive, based on a non-unique class they can be converted from. If you do not choose the Cult alts, they will receive a random valid set.
Not really on topic mostly but, majority of the games Iâve seen Cult in, the Cult class that spawned with the Cult Leader selected the Cult Alts.
- Begrudged King:
Pass the Torch (Passive) - If you die, a vote to determine the next king will be held at start of the next day.
Head of State (Passive) - Your vote counts as two if there are more than 5 players alive except during Grand Trial. Immune to occupation and redirection. Your abilities do not count as visits.
Grand Trial (Day) - Instantly put a player on trial for treason lasting up to 24 hours possibly extending day. They may provide a defense within 12 hours, and then the players alive may either vote to execute or pardon. If a majority of players vote to execute, the day will end and the player on trial will be lynched. Otherwise, the day will continue as normal. - 1 use
Guard! (Night) - Choose a player. They will be immune to death tonight. - 3 uses
Scapegoat (Night) - Send guards to frame two targets. - Infinite uses
Survive to see 2 marked players lynched.
Sorry to quote the whole class but, there is nothing here that says players you visit will be marked. I know we all know that they will be marked but some people can be stupid.
- Inquisitor:
You will commit suicide after completing your righteous mission.
Common Sense tells me that he shouldnât commit suicide but instead just leave the court room. Then again my non-common sense tells me that this makes sense.
Thatâs all, if you find more please tell me.